Conversation(Expression) unit 6

HELLO FLOCKS!
There is my conversation(expression) with my friend Nando. This is below the link of the sound.
https://soundcloud.com/hernando-permadi/english-conv
CHECK IT OUT!
It will be pleasant for me correct and leave comment here.
And thank you :)

Draft
Nando : Hello Rizal! Do you wanna go to some club house like in the Pakuwon City?
Rizal   : No i unlike hangout place like that. Can you suggest other please?
Nando : Okay how about we are going to coffee shop?
Rizal   : It's sounds great! By the way can you suggest the coffee shop?
Nando : How about starbucks coffee?
Rizal   : No! It's an expensive place. How about Angkringan?
Nando : Okay! I think it's a good place too.
Rizal   : Nando, would you treat me for this time?
Nando : Oh man... I don't have much money now.
Rizal   : Just a cup of coffee please....
Nando : How pity you are! Okay i gonna treat you
Rizal   : Thank you man. You are my best friend!
Nando : Okay, but where is the angkringan?
Rizal   : Are you don't know? The place near the EEPIS Campus.
Nando : Ah! That place! So when we will going to that place?
Rizal   : How about this night? At 8 PM?
Nando : So 8 PM? Okay! Be there in time!