Conversation(Expression) unit 6

HELLO FLOCKS!
There is my conversation(expression) with my friend Nando. This is below the link of the sound.
https://soundcloud.com/hernando-permadi/english-conv
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Draft
Nando : Hello Rizal! Do you wanna go to some club house like in the Pakuwon City?
Rizal   : No i unlike hangout place like that. Can you suggest other please?
Nando : Okay how about we are going to coffee shop?
Rizal   : It's sounds great! By the way can you suggest the coffee shop?
Nando : How about starbucks coffee?
Rizal   : No! It's an expensive place. How about Angkringan?
Nando : Okay! I think it's a good place too.
Rizal   : Nando, would you treat me for this time?
Nando : Oh man... I don't have much money now.
Rizal   : Just a cup of coffee please....
Nando : How pity you are! Okay i gonna treat you
Rizal   : Thank you man. You are my best friend!
Nando : Okay, but where is the angkringan?
Rizal   : Are you don't know? The place near the EEPIS Campus.
Nando : Ah! That place! So when we will going to that place?
Rizal   : How about this night? At 8 PM?
Nando : So 8 PM? Okay! Be there in time!

CONVERSATION VIDEO THAT CONTAINS SIX PRONOUN

this is my first appeared in youtube

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Sorry for this fail scenes and actors :'(

Assignment From Mr Muhammad

Please help me to find the mistake :D, just confess I ain't perfect.

Introducing Friend to Another Friend

One day in the Sunday morning in the park I met my friend, actually  my old friend. His named Galih.

Me         :  Hi Galih long time no see, what’s up bro?

G             : I’m fine bro thank’s what about you?

Me         : I’m fine too thank’s, by the way where are you studying on for now?

G             : Alhamdulillah I’m at STAN Jakarta now.

Me         : Oh well, so what are you doing here?

G             : Mmm… just take a walk and seek for fresh air bro.

                While Me and Galih take some conversation suddenly I saw my other friend from EEPIS His  name is Koko, then I shouted at Him.

Me         : Wooyyy! Brooo! (shouting)

K             : Oh Rizal what’s up bro?

Me         : I’m fine thank’s, where do you come from?

K             : Just come from my grandma's house.

Me         : Mmm so where will you going?

K             : I hunger I want seeking for some meal, btw who’s that beside you?

Me         : Oh this is my friend his name is Galih  he studied at STAN Jakarta for now, and Galih this is  Koko He is my friend from EEPIS be nice :D

G             : Hi Koko nice to meet you

K             : Nice to meet you too Galih, well I’m hungry. So acquiesce you to accompany me?

Me & G   : Okay no prob bro let’s rock! 

            Finally both of them acquainted know each other.

Okay frieds that's my story, which yours? hahaha

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My Bio

         Assalamualaikum Wr. Wb.
         Welcome flock's thanks for visit my blog!
Okay here Iam, I'd like to introduce about myself.
first let us know my full name, I was spawned with name Muhammad Syahrizal Widodo and usually my fellas call my name just Rizal.
        Then I was born in Kediri city 14th of  February 1996, of course Iam 18 years and 7 months old now. I  live in Surabaya for now but actually I'm originally from Kediri, my Kediri address is Brenggolo village number 153 Kediri regency, and yes I from urban haha :Dv.
        And next I'll tell you about my family, I've one little brother and of course my parrents. My hobby is gaming and soccer.
        About my game I like playing NFS Most Wanted, Point Blank, and DOTA. DOTA is my favourite one, this game which most I've played ever.
        Okay flocks this is my final introduction if  you want to know more about me leave a comment, and please correction me and thank's before and after.
        Waalaikumsalam Wr. Wb.